留学文书PS案例范文

admitwrite   2016-07-06 留学文书

Question: What characteristic of Penn and yourself make the University a particularly good match for you? Briefly describe how you envision your first year in college. How will your presence be known on campus?I have the difficult task of being the first?

I will be the first one in my family who has ever studied overseas, and while I find this idea fascinating, I realize it will not be easy. Without having anyone around to advise me about the new life I will face, I have had to figure out everything by myself. If I am to make a mistake in selecting a college, I will bear the full burden of that mistake. As I begin to realize this, I understand that I will need to find the inner strength and selfIrelianceto face difficult changes alone, but I know I have the personal strength to do this. In addition, because I am the first in my family to be educated abroad, my tenIyearold sister looks up to me in awe. She fully expects to follow in my footsteps and to be educatedin the legendary land that I am constantly speaking of. As a result, I must be careful in what I do since she will follow in my tracks. Thinking about these consequences, I decided that nothing would be easy for me, but that whatever I faced, I would never give up. With the hopes of my little sister on the line, I am not going to thwart her dreams of studying in the States. My father was the first per son in his family who earned auniversity diploma, and my receiving an excel lent US education would vindicate the hard work he did to make this possible for me. When I first saw the booklet of University of Pennsylvania on my counselor’s desk, I knew right away that this was the school I wanted to be part of. The University of Pennsylvania offers me much more than an education. It also offers me the opportunity to learn how to be an individual who can fulfill society needs both now and in the future. Moreover, since UPenn has a long history .I knew that I would fit in the dynamic, inventive atmosphere. Since the responsibility of being the first is great, I believe that UPenn, with many students in similar situations, would provide me the support I need to excel in this very important academic community. If I am admitted to the college, I will not fool around trying to get situated; instead, I will work to integrate myself into the campus community from the very beginning to become a contributing member of my class. In a familiar environment surrounded by people who share my drive and determination, I will work to display the strength and eagerness to learn and to achieve in my eyes. My success in the lessons and achievements in friendship will be enough to recognize me in hundreds of students. I will be the first person in my family who attends a college in the States that knows the privilege of ’being first’.